the final version of my double page spread has been improve in the most part through cleaver use of artwork and through general finishing. i have editied my pictures to acheive the maximum quality, although the detail still isnt to a high definition it is a dramatic improvement to the photos last used. i have also done some layout editing mainly through extending and thickening the pages header art work. through this i have created a much more influential link between the picture and the artical title.