TA Feedback

My TA feedback was overall possitive however there was some slight issues that where raised by the readers.
.They Didnt like the wording of the text above title
.Thought that anchoring text was possitioned in wrong location
.Wanted the puffs to be more dominant on the page

I will adress these issues and come up with another edit.
I will do this through giving the puffs titles linking to their sections and also by addind a stronger colour to them such as the blue tones which will also tie the puffs to the image. I will mover the anchoring text and make the font larger to draw more attention from the veiwer when looking at a glance. The wording above will be replace by the moto of the magazine "See it through the artist Eyes"
I hope this changes will adress the needs of the target audience when i get more feed back on my next edit.